1. Keep your writing organized and focused.
2. Elaborate on your ideas.
3. Use a strong voice to make your writing interesting.
4. Use higher level vocabulary.
5. Edit, edit, edit for spelling, capitalization, punctuation, and grammar.
2. Elaborate on your ideas.
3. Use a strong voice to make your writing interesting.
4. Use higher level vocabulary.
5. Edit, edit, edit for spelling, capitalization, punctuation, and grammar.
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Random this is the beggining of my short story:
The Amazing World of Stuff
It all started on a Friday in the middle of a dark cold storm that had been wrecking havoc for days. The storm has been calm but I don’t dare to go outside. “When do you think the storm will stop” I asked my dad. “From what I heard it is going to last several more days” answered my dad. “Okay I am going to find something to do in the basement” I said. I headed toward the stairs and lit a candle for light. The basement was usually damp, but now it felt as if I was being watched. I went through several boxes and found nothing. When I was done going through the boxes I found a small wooden hatchet I opened it up and found a latter going deep down. I eventually got to the bottom when I found a strange metal room. Inside was a mirror. I don't know why but I had an urge to step into the mirror so I did. Somehow I walked straight through the mirror but nothing seemed different. I went up the ladder not knowing what was going on. When I reached the top there was no basement, but a vast land of multicoloured fields and a orange sky. In terror I quickly slid down the ladder only to find the mirror was gone.
I stood there trying to process what was happening. It all seemed that this happen so fast. “Help!!” I yelled. “Hello?”A voice asked from above. I slowly climbed up the ladder and found a small creature unlike anything I had ever seen. “Hello?” It said quietly. “Hello.” I said. “Who are you where am I?!” I quickly said. “Me? I am Smeagull and you are in the land of Schmeh” Smeagull said. Smeagull was only about 2 feet tall. He had floppy ears like a dog and his skin was a green and blue colour. “Why can’t I go back” I asked “None have left this land alive” He answered “What do you mean alive” I said. “ Well there is 1 way to return but it is very treacherous” He answered “Oh... Anyways what is this place” I asked. “Well Its a interconnection with all the different dimensions” Smeagull said. “Well I think we should go follow me” He said. “Okay” I said.
Random this is the beggining of my short story:
The Amazing World of Stuff
It all started on a Friday in the middle of a dark cold storm that had been wrecking havoc for days. The storm has been calm but I don’t dare to go outside. “When do you think the storm will stop” I asked my dad. “From what I heard it is going to last several more days” answered my dad. “Okay I am going to find something to do in the basement” I said. I headed toward the stairs and lit a candle for light. The basement was usually damp, but now it felt as if I was being watched. I went through several boxes and found nothing. When I was done going through the boxes I found a small wooden hatchet I opened it up and found a latter going deep down. I eventually got to the bottom when I found a strange metal room. Inside was a mirror. I don't know why but I had an urge to step into the mirror so I did. Somehow I walked straight through the mirror but nothing seemed different. I went up the ladder not knowing what was going on. When I reached the top there was no basement, but a vast land of multicoloured fields and a orange sky. In terror I quickly slid down the ladder only to find the mirror was gone.
I stood there trying to process what was happening. It all seemed that this happen so fast. “Help!!” I yelled. “Hello?”A voice asked from above. I slowly climbed up the ladder and found a small creature unlike anything I had ever seen. “Hello?” It said quietly. “Hello.” I said. “Who are you where am I?!” I quickly said. “Me? I am Smeagull and you are in the land of Schmeh” Smeagull said. Smeagull was only about 2 feet tall. He had floppy ears like a dog and his skin was a green and blue colour. “Why can’t I go back” I asked “None have left this land alive” He answered “What do you mean alive” I said. “ Well there is 1 way to return but it is very treacherous” He answered “Oh... Anyways what is this place” I asked. “Well Its a interconnection with all the different dimensions” Smeagull said. “Well I think we should go follow me” He said. “Okay” I said.
That was pointless Taytay.
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