1. Keep your writing organized and focused.
2. Elaborate on your ideas.
3. Use a strong voice to make your writing interesting.
4. Use higher level vocabulary.
5. Edit, edit, edit for spelling, capitalization, punctuation, and grammar.
2. Elaborate on your ideas.
3. Use a strong voice to make your writing interesting.
4. Use higher level vocabulary.
5. Edit, edit, edit for spelling, capitalization, punctuation, and grammar.
Random this is the beggining of my short story:
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It all started on a Friday in the middle of a dark cold storm that had been wrecking havoc for days. The storm has been calm but I don’t dare to go outside. “When do you think the storm will stop” I asked my dad. “From what I heard it is going to last several more days” answered my dad. “Okay I am going to find something to do in the basement” I said. I headed toward the stairs and lit a candle for light. The basement was usually damp, but now it felt as if I was being watched. I went through several boxes and found nothing. When I was done going through the boxes I found a small wooden hatchet I opened it up and found a latter going deep down. I eventually got to the bottom when I found a strange metal room. Inside was a mirror. I don't know why but I had an urge to step into the mirror so I did. Somehow I walked straight through the mirror but nothing seemed different. I went up the ladder not knowing what was going on. When I reached the top there was no basement, but a vast land of multicoloured fields and a orange sky. In terror I quickly slid down the ladder only to find the mirror was gone.
I stood there trying to process what was happening. It all seemed that this happen so fast. “Help!!” I yelled. “Hello?”A voice asked from above. I slowly climbed up the ladder and found a small creature unlike anything I had ever seen. “Hello?” It said quietly. “Hello.” I said. “Who are you where am I?!” I quickly said. “Me? I am Smeagull and you are in the land of Schmeh” Smeagull said. Smeagull was only about 2 feet tall. He had floppy ears like a dog and his skin was a green and blue colour. “Why can’t I go back” I asked “None have left this land alive” He answered “What do you mean alive” I said. “ Well there is 1 way to return but it is very treacherous” He answered “Oh... Anyways what is this place” I asked. “Well Its a interconnection with all the different dimensions” Smeagull said. “Well I think we should go follow me” He said. “Okay” I said.
Random this is the beggining of my short story:
ReplyDeleteThe Amazing World of Stuff
It all started on a Friday in the middle of a dark cold storm that had been wrecking havoc for days. The storm has been calm but I don’t dare to go outside. “When do you think the storm will stop” I asked my dad. “From what I heard it is going to last several more days” answered my dad. “Okay I am going to find something to do in the basement” I said. I headed toward the stairs and lit a candle for light. The basement was usually damp, but now it felt as if I was being watched. I went through several boxes and found nothing. When I was done going through the boxes I found a small wooden hatchet I opened it up and found a latter going deep down. I eventually got to the bottom when I found a strange metal room. Inside was a mirror. I don't know why but I had an urge to step into the mirror so I did. Somehow I walked straight through the mirror but nothing seemed different. I went up the ladder not knowing what was going on. When I reached the top there was no basement, but a vast land of multicoloured fields and a orange sky. In terror I quickly slid down the ladder only to find the mirror was gone.
I stood there trying to process what was happening. It all seemed that this happen so fast. “Help!!” I yelled. “Hello?”A voice asked from above. I slowly climbed up the ladder and found a small creature unlike anything I had ever seen. “Hello?” It said quietly. “Hello.” I said. “Who are you where am I?!” I quickly said. “Me? I am Smeagull and you are in the land of Schmeh” Smeagull said. Smeagull was only about 2 feet tall. He had floppy ears like a dog and his skin was a green and blue colour. “Why can’t I go back” I asked “None have left this land alive” He answered “What do you mean alive” I said. “ Well there is 1 way to return but it is very treacherous” He answered “Oh... Anyways what is this place” I asked. “Well Its a interconnection with all the different dimensions” Smeagull said. “Well I think we should go follow me” He said. “Okay” I said.
That was pointless Taytay.
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